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First ficlet..nervous as hell guys!!

  • Nov. 30th, 2007 at 9:21 PM
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Okay flist..  This is my very first attempt at anything remotely fictional.  

Title:  "Hopeless Romantic"
Pairing:  Frankie x Gerard
Rating: pg i guess
Summary: Frankie gets a new tat.  Short & fluffy
Beta: [info]bluejbird kindly looked over this for me.  Not really beta-ed but glanced over 
Disclaimer: I wish i owned them, however, sadly i do not.

Looking around the room Frank thought about how many times he’d been in this position. He was sitting in the chair of a tattoo shop somewhere in the Midwest, this trip had been slightly spur of the minute. Frank and Gerard had been drinking coffee and talking about their relationship; the secret but not so secret relationship they currently shared. Thinking back Frank knew it was impulsive and probably stupid and reckless of him but he wanted to prove to Gerard that he was serious about ‘them’.

“I should get a new tattoo” Frank said staring absently into his empty coffee cup; “like a secret tattoo just for me and you, you know to remind me of how much I love you”.

Gerard looked over at his lover, Frank did tend to sporadically get tattooed so his statement wasn’t surprising. “What would you get? A big heart with ‘I love Gerard’ in?”. He knew he shouldn’t encourage Frank but it was so easy to wind up his friend . Frank looked put out by Gerard’s response “well obviously not, how corny and clichéd is that! I was thinking something more tasteful”.

That’s how he ended up in his current position; sitting in this damn chair waiting for the artist.

Frank wasn’t new to this, he had more tattoos than he cared to count but he knew what he wanted and wasn‘t going to let a little thing like pain stand in his way. Frank winced and laughed at almost everything to cover up the fact he was in pain; he knew it was going to be worth it. He loved Gerard and wanted to show him just how much.

A few hours after the idea had struck him Frank looked at his newly tattooed hands, he was happy with the end result. The design was simple and elegant. It displayed how he felt perfectly.

He held his hands out so Gerard could see the final result. On each hand Frank now had two words that when put together would remind him of his lover and he knew as he leaned over to kiss Gerard that everyday he would feel like a “Hopeless Romantic”.

End.



I apologize in advance if it's bad.  Concrit and comments are very welcome; help me get better.

Thank you to  [info]bluejbird for your help and the fabulous conversation that inspired me to post this.


 
 

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[info]obsidianserpent wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 09:38 am (UTC)
That's really nice. The flashback at the begining to show how he got there was very neatly handled too.

The tattoo design was perfect. I could totally believe in Frank getting a tattoo like that, it's just the sort of thing he'd choose.

You will have to write some more fiction, you know, this was really enjoyable.
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 03:49 pm (UTC)
Thank very much. I was really nervous about posting this it being my first piece of finished fiction. When i write i tend not to plan it out and mostly end up losing the plot.

I'm going to try and write somemore.. i have loads of ideas that would be a shame to waste, also i've discussed with other people ideas.. ninja bob might be my next idea to tackle. and then theres the bandom sleepover that's currently dancing in my head. and then this mornign i had another idea... christmas at pete and patricks house (it was cute when i thought about it this morning honestly).
[info]lindawonderland wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 10:05 pm (UTC)
*grins* awwww, this is such a sweet piece^^ I'm pretty much too tired to give a good comment but it did cheer me up ^^
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 10:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you!! I wrote it when i was at a biomechanics seminar, sitting outside in below freezing temperatures. I needed something to warm me up, and this did the trick!
[info]lindawonderland wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 10:34 pm (UTC)
haha, i totally believe you! :D
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 10:36 pm (UTC)
Yeah. I wasn't going to post it, but someone i was chatting to the other day told me i should.. so.

And today i wrote patrick/joe, but i sent it to be beta-ed so it might not be posted for a few days. It's also fluff, apparently i can only write fluff..

I wanted to get more into writing aswel as reading, i feel like a mooch to much off this fandom.
[info]lindawonderland wrote:
Dec. 1st, 2007 10:38 pm (UTC)
well i honestly think it's very brave to do so! I personally am far too much a chicken to post such things, and i truly admire people who dare to do so. Who knows i might get inspired myself one day, heehee!

Fluff is good, i guess to get to smut you first need to know your fluff well ;)
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 12:26 am (UTC)
Fluff is good to know before launching into the smut, i might have to wait a while before i'm comfortable enough to write that.

i'm really only posting to maybe get my creativness going, you know.. i've been inspred recently to tey and be more creative, maybe get some confidence from posting stuff i've written.

It's quite fun!
[info]lordgroovius wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 01:54 am (UTC)
Well done! :D I really like it :) ♥ xo
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 01:55 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm thinking i might post it on a comm and see what kinds of responses i get.
(no subject) - [info]blossyn - Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:08 am (UTC)
i just posted it to frankxgerard. stressful, esp. since i posted it wrong an un bete-ed then a beta got in touch, so i had to go back and fix a few things..omg..stressful!!!
[info]blossyn wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:08 am (UTC)
totally posted in the wrong place before *smack*

omg, posting fic is so nervewracking, but I'm really glad you did because this was enjoyable and so fun to read!

I love what frankie got tattoed on himself....it's perfect without being too sappy.

<3 for this!
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:09 am (UTC)
ooops, well i just replied to the wrong place too!! heehee. how silly!
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:11 am (UTC)
i just posted it to frankxgerard. stressful, esp. since i posted it wrong an un bete-ed then a beta got in touch, so i had to go back and fix a few things..omg..stressful!!!


Incase you didn't get the reply from before. grr..lj is all stressful for me tonight!
[info]blossyn wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:27 am (UTC)
Hee! I got it!

And totally stressful, no doubt, but it probably also feels freeing, and next time will be less stressful. One would hope, anyways!
[info]finny91 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2007 04:31 am (UTC)
yeah, one would hope.. although next time will be to a different journal, apparently my mind is bursting with fic. i wrote patrick/ joe today and hopefully the beta will get it back to me soon.
[info]mintyfiend wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2008 11:33 pm (UTC)
DUDE. Ok that's just really sweet. Frankie and Gee, so much love. :D
[info]finny91 wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!!! Frankie & Gee were the only pairing i knew at this point apart from pete/patrick. I wrote this when it was like -10 outside and i was sitting outside at a horse biomechanics conference freezing my ass off. this kept me warm!!
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